This I Promise

Expressing true love is a hard thing
But for you
i will do anything
This I promise

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Love is hard to express but for you I'll do anything and this I promise you.
This shows how much you love her and will do anything for her

Look way deep into my eyes
Stare
Let me hold your hand
Caress your tender skin

Put on a smile
Reminisce on all the good times
For more are to come
This I promise

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Those two stanza are amazging
Look deep in my eyes, let me hold.
Smile for all the good times to come. Those stanza are powerful

I love it flowed great
And each stanza you were expressing yourself and how you promise to her, great tone

Great write loved it(:
5/5

What a lovely heartfelt poem!

So sweet and very romantic!

I love the last stanza - my favourite part

You talk of this girl as though she is royalty. I love it!

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I appreciated this poem, though certain parts seem cliche. That it isn't always a bad thing, but I don't feel like it fits in this poem.