Congrats on 2nd Place Jenni!!!!
I loved this poem

Just a few things

money I need to beg for
blasphemy I have to ignore
if all of them knew my story
for judging me they'd be sorry

The flow was broken here in the last 2 lines, maybe because the rhyming was off, and seemed force.

Took the money I collected
followed them where detected
house of mirrors is where they went
what then happened wasn't pleasant

Same with this stanza, last 2 lines rhymes were off

Other than this.

A very sad write, that was so obviously written with emotion,
deservedly winning second place!

love,
Tara-Kay

I loved it your talent shines through every word well done x

Jenni, I swear your words flowed very well and I am proud that you guys were that great! believe me I am having fun in every single moment!!!
this was really well-written and the structure was as smart as you :P
I adored everything about it! :)

Here is what I wrote in my comment, there in the club:P

"Ouch, I remember this piece, it was too long, in my opinion, it couldn't keep me as interested as at first, so I didn't give it a vote, BUT I must say that the wording/flow/title were amazing so I hope this wins, no criticism, really."

So, I have to say, the length was what ruined this perfect piece of yours! nominated :)

An amazing poem and worthy of a win. Your flow and wording was priceless .
Connie

This is fantastic! I'm so glad you won second with it. Good job as usual

This amazing Jenni, I love every single word on it, congratulations for your talent :) 5/5

Grt job..5/5..

A very good piece. I love the flow of it. Congrats.

Interesting storytelling and tragic, but poetry nevertheless. Nicely done.

Wow very heart touching an sad it's really good 5/5 :)