Though this has emotion the format in which it has been sumitted really does not fit the piece at all. Your word choice is interesting. There is no clear end or beginning. There really was no story or meaning behind the poem, just raw emotion. Which can be taken well or in some cases in a bad way. Take it how you please. I'd have to say this is only worthy of a 4/5, at best.

I appreciate a 4/5 anyway and I apprecaite you reading and commenting. I dont write for the poem to be correct or in the right format, I just wrote it when I was angry. But thank you for your feedback. :)