Can you hear her

by believeinlove87   Aug 15, 2011


Can you hear her,
as she whispers,
I love you,
i need you,
i miss you.

Can you hear her,
as she pours out her soul,
as she lets down her guard,
exposes her heart to you,
tells you her every last secret.

Can you hear her,
cry her eyes out,
scream out your name,
wish for you to be back,
to give her your love.

Can you hear her,
as she whispers,
i can't do this anymore,
as she gives up,
ready to say goodbye.

Can you hear her,
as she yells i love you,
as she runs after you screaming your name,
begging for you back,
drops down to her knees,
bawling her eyes out.

Can you hear her,
decide to end her life,
that she can't take it,
say if i don't have you,
then this life isn't worth living,
say i found the sharpest blade.

Can you hear her,
plead for your help,
as she starts to cut her throat.

No you can't hear her,
her throat is cut to deep,
no sound comes out,
as she hits the floor,
eyes roll back into her head,
with her last breath of air,
she whispers,
i love you forever </3.

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  • 13 years ago

    by brokenf4evermore

    All I can say is damn, Really,really,really,really,really,really,really,really,really,really,and I mean REALLY Beautiful. Sad as hell,but so very beautiful.Its amazing to see how blessed some guys are to have a woman that cares that much about them and they don't deserve them.I don't know how much sense that makes but one more time-Sad but Absolutely Beautiful!!!!!

  • 13 years ago

    by Dave

    Wow foking awesome! it hit me inside, Love it

  • 13 years ago

    by The Poet Behind The Poems

    So powerful so captivating i loved this i no peopel that tryed to take there life but lucky one of my poems stoped her ... in emotion u have penned here is mind blowing your a real talent x

  • 13 years ago

    by BlueJay

    Wow, this is absolutely amazing!! You have done a magnificent job! The flow is nice, the word choice is pretty good. Though there is not too much imagery, emotion makes up for that. Emotion just totally overflows in this piece, and it is described so well!

    Can you hear her,
    as she pours out her soul,
    as she lets down her guard,
    exposes her heart to you,
    tells you her every last secret.

    This ^^ is my favorite stanza in this piece. I think it shows just how much she needs the person. It shows just how far people will go to get what they want, and even when they go as far as you can possibly imagine, yet it supposedly isn't good enough.

    Really I think that this piece is almost flawless. 5/5. Though I am sorry for the length.

  • 13 years ago

    by Joe Forrest

    Wow is all i can say. That was such a strong emotion pouring out of every line. Simply Amazing. Wow.

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