My Everlasting Vow

by The Poet Behind The Poems   Aug 16, 2011


I lie in bed, I'm wide awake
Thinking of you so much heartache
Waiting for the phone that just wont ring
Waiting for our song that together we could sing

When you smile it freezes time
When you look at me, im on cloud nine
The memory of you I keep in a hidden part
Puts a smile on my face, a blanket round my heart

This first time I met you ill never forget
The first time we kiss will be like Romeo and Juliet
Ill always be there, through troubles big and small
Ill always be there to catch you, if ever you should fall

If you don't believe the words I say
Listen for the unspoken words I pray
I'd walk a thousand miles to hear your voice
I'd swim the deepest ocean to prove my choice

We seem perfect you said that to me
If that's how you feel how can we not be?
This is my promise, my everlasting vow
Ill find away to you someday somehow

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  • 13 years ago

    by Innocent Fairy

    I love this who ever inspired u 4 this poem is very lucky to have that love :) 5/5 I loved everything :)

  • 13 years ago

    by Robert Gardiner

    Great Write, Kudos!!!

  • 13 years ago

    by MyaEve

    Very beautiful, but I do think, Also, that I thought the poem would be about a wedding, you might want to look into another interesting title.

    But the flow, it was very smooth.
    I love the rhyme, and the whole story behind the poem.

    Another great write :D

  • 13 years ago

    by nouriguess

    A romantic love poem?
    They all seem the same, anyways. Lol. I'm kidding, this made me smile! :)
    But I think there is a typo in the last line:

    "Find away" = "Find a way"

    When I first read the title, I thought that this was meant to be a poem about a wedding or something where people vow and I don't know, lol, I wasn't that much impressed and caught by the title, so, I suggest to change it.

    But there was a soft flow, some words felt promising and smooth. Good work.

  • 13 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    I agree whole heartedly with Lili and Jenni.
    The title while simple makes you want to read,
    and the poem itself was lovely, a great job.
    Only think I would say is don't forget punctuation, that will help the flow and make it a little easier to read.

    Overall,
    a fantastic job

    love Tara-Kay
    xx

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