YOUR BEAUTIFUL DARLING :))
by Tear Tracks and Pixie Dust Aug 17, 2011
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"Don't worry you pretty little head my darling, don't even think about suicide. It's not your fault he wasn't for you, It's not your fault he lied. Your life is beautiful it's not something to waste, so why would you give it up with such rush and haste? Killing yourself won't get him back, It won't make him realize what he's lost. He isn't worth your stunning attention so don't pay such a drastic cost. You are better then anything he'll ever get again and just because he can't see that, don't cause yourself so much pain." |
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13 years ago
by Brittany C
"Don't worry you pretty little head my darling, "
the "you" in this line should be "your"
The flow was off but if you were to shorten the line by splitting them in 2 it would help. Could also try making it in to more then one paragraph instead of 1.
gave it a 5/5
