by The Poet Behind The Poems Aug 18, 2011
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
Everyday he's on your mind |
by Jessica
Wow, amazing write!! my favorite line is the last one. "I'll be your prince charming let me rescue you." Really talented 5/5 all the way :) |
by BlueJay
Wow everyone else has said the exact things I was going to say. Okay well good job, and yes please keep writing, cause this is amazing! |
AWSOME WRITE, MUCH ENJOYED!!! |
by Tara Kay
Good piece Tony, The flow was a little choppy in places, and some of the rhymes seemed forced, but overall, the content was beautifully worded, so good job. |
by Heather
I loved this so much :) It's beautiful, and makes perfect sense. Wonderful! good job.. |