Wow... this was absolutely beautiful. A poem from the guy in the shadows. In most cases, the best friend. Like every girl, I'm pretty naive to guys like you. I chase someone who could care less about me; one that wouldn't ever go out of his way to put a smile on my face. And I ignore the boys who would do ANYTHING to give me the world. I'll never understand why. Hopefully this poem will help us girls realize there are guys out there who only want to make us happy. One day you'll have your Cinderella. Promise. You're an incredible writer. Never stop. 5/5<3

--KaylaMariee.<3

I can relate a lot to this, wich makes me love it even more, great job as usual 5/5 xx

This was lovely, Tony!
I love the way you named it Cinderella, too, nice touch(;

The feelings in this poem were marvelous, I could feel the love the from the man who was hiding, his love for her was very deep.

Marvelous poem, well penned, 5/5

I like how you started this poem, the beginning stanza does not give away out of whos persepective this poem is written. It also shows that the speaker knows a lot about the woman he adores. This poem is really heartfelt and full of emotions, I also like its message.

Every second his love you try to find

^^^
In my opinion, this is a bit awkward.
But in all, nice poem you've penned here, keep writing! ;)

You sure are an emotional writer, I love how I get these different feeling from you when I read. You have a tremendous talent and with each poem it blossoms. Keep writing never stop giving us the pleasure of your work.
Connie

I loved this so much :) It's beautiful, and makes perfect sense. Wonderful! good job..

Good piece Tony, The flow was a little choppy in places, and some of the rhymes seemed forced, but overall, the content was beautifully worded, so good job.

Love Tara

AWSOME WRITE, MUCH ENJOYED!!!

Wow everyone else has said the exact things I was going to say. Okay well good job, and yes please keep writing, cause this is amazing!

Wow, amazing write!! my favorite line is the last one. "I'll be your prince charming let me rescue you." Really talented 5/5 all the way :)