This is one of the best poems I've seen on this site in a VERY long time. The way you use your words, your perfect word structure, such a bright variety of vocabulary. Definitely was an AMAZING poem. One you should be proud of. I could relate and I'm sure so will many others. Lost love is one of the biggest inspirations for writing poetry, and I know a certain person, besides myself, who would absolutely adore this poem. I couldn't even pick a favorite part, I loved the ENTIRE piece. You definitely did a magnificent job and I look forward to reading more of your work. 5/5

--KaylaMariee.<3