HER AGAIN

by Brook   Aug 18, 2011


All it takes is just one look,
and I end up staying,
secretly hoping,
silently praying,
that it won't become
What it was before,
alone on the couch
staring at the door,
waiting on you
to come home to me,
the night drags on,
Its now clear to see,
all the talk is true;
I've lost you,
I no longer have to wonder
where you were,
everyone has told me,
They seen you with her.

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  • 11 years ago

    by Rupert

    Great poem, and actually great poems in general, raw and real. Keep it up

  • 12 years ago

    by Brook

    Thank you very much, im glad you enjoyed it!! :))

  • 12 years ago

    by marina14

    So sad i love the way you put it together hun (: very good

  • 13 years ago

    by Brook

    Thank you, that means a lot, i am normally shy with my poems and things so thank you. please keep reading i would love some feed back, and any suggestions on making my writing better

    Brook

  • 13 years ago

    by Kayla

    Absolutely incredible... short, sweet, and to the point. Someone definitely broke your heart. I can relate to every single sentence. We all strive to make the one we love happy, but in the end... sometimes we're better off without them. Whether we realize it or not. I'm sure 99% of teenaged girls can relate to this. You have a way with words, you don't "beat around the bush". Straight to the point. Don't leave the reader guessing.
    LOVED IT. 5/5

    --KaylaMariee.<3

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