Absolutely incredible... short, sweet, and to the point. Someone definitely broke your heart. I can relate to every single sentence. We all strive to make the one we love happy, but in the end... sometimes we're better off without them. Whether we realize it or not. I'm sure 99% of teenaged girls can relate to this. You have a way with words, you don't "beat around the bush". Straight to the point. Don't leave the reader guessing.
LOVED IT. 5/5

--KaylaMariee.<3

Thank you, that means a lot, i am normally shy with my poems and things so thank you. please keep reading i would love some feed back, and any suggestions on making my writing better

Brook

So sad i love the way you put it together hun (: very good

Thank you very much, im glad you enjoyed it!! :))

Great poem, and actually great poems in general, raw and real. Keep it up