This is amazing, this is very unique and I love your style a lot.
I love the way you show your own personality in your poems!
and I love how each line can be enjoyed the way the reader himself is feeling, and what I love the most is how you can draw me in as areader like nothing else can. You do capture my attention!
This poem is very unique, and on a side note I want to telll you that the pencil writes best when its sharpened, and to be sharpened, the pencil suffers a bit ;)