Wow this amazing, it truly is, so heart-felt, great job Tony 5/5 x

This poem flows well and I think that the feeling is strong too. It's quite heartbreaking reading how much the speaker misses his love. You did a good job writing a powerful poem.

Loss is painful, and actually forever in my opinion maybe it gets easier but I'm not sure.
You made us feel the loss with this write, you brought a tear and a feeling of forever in the gut.
I enjoy poems that touches the soul, rips at the heart. You did both with this
Connie

Last night I lay thinking about you
Now you're gone I don't know what to do
To move on with my life or to end it here
To end it all with one final tear

Such strong emotion, losing the one you love & not knowing if you should continue to live or just kill yourself to be with them. I can relate to this poem. I LOVE it<3. Such amazing emotion,pouring out your soul wanting nothing more then to be with that person again<3

That was a good one. It really did show strong feeling and emotions about loosing someone you love. 5/5

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This is a great poem, I can totally relate and feel your pain