My Heart Beats

Wow ,what a flow..words,rhyming,structure..feel ..just loved everything..5 sweets..sugar..

Wow ,what a flow..words,rhyming,structure..feel ..just loved everything..

Nice poem, it's kind of sweet. Nice wording and flow.

5/5

Wow! This poem is amazing... it touched me! I liked the simplicity of the poem, yet it's still deep and filled with emotion. I felt the heartbeats, and that they were only for that person. I loved the flow and rhythm of the poem, I think it was very well done. Well done!

Powerful, puristic, poetic for a penchant prized love.