This is a very smooth and thoughtful poem. I liked it a lot.

Its a fresh air to have you in our club, i enjoyed reading your poem, its full of love and innocence and passion.

I loved it and i think your style is pretty enjoyable and easy for the readers to enjoy and come back to it :)

5/5

Love love love this girl :)
5/5
shows your true emotions!

Ya took awhile but cried my eyes out and it just came to me :) it truly is what I felt in that very moment :)

Powerful, puristic, poetic for a penchant prized love.

Wow! This poem is amazing... it touched me! I liked the simplicity of the poem, yet it's still deep and filled with emotion. I felt the heartbeats, and that they were only for that person. I loved the flow and rhythm of the poem, I think it was very well done. Well done!

Nice poem, it's kind of sweet. Nice wording and flow.

5/5

Wow ,what a flow..words,rhyming,structure..feel ..just loved everything..

Wow ,what a flow..words,rhyming,structure..feel ..just loved everything..5 sweets..sugar..