Connie, yuo,did a great jib job with,this,
i loved it girl,very good words snd imagery.
lve,
tara

As always beautiful x

Huddled in the arms of doubt
feeling the sickness spread.
Still the fire burns bright
in the core of her soul
^ I think you portray a vivid image here, especially with the first two verses. They had me captivated and I was interested in knowing how this frustratin situation would continue. You might want to think about inserting a period at the end of the last verse.

Passion flares at the sight
of him, the scent of him.
^ I think that the connection of „passion“ and „flare“ fits really well because „passion“ reminds me of „desire“ and that reminds me of the burning fire of love that can't be earased easily. Mentioning his scent underlines the message really well because the scent of the beloved ones is always strong and has a huge meaning to oneself.

He feels the fire, flames
of love lick at his skin
tasting , searing , as desire
tries to devour
^Nice choice of words, though I'd recommend you to remove the space characters before the comma, it looks somewhat weird.

It's mirrored in her eyes
the air is filled with it's essence.
^ I like the image you paint her because it reminds the reader of how much it effects her since the eyes are a reflection of peoples soul. I also think that the second „it's“ is supposed to be an „its“.

Forever tattooed on her heart
while the disease of fear consume.
Making her wait till dubiety
is exorcised
^ I think this ending is really nice, since it doesn't exactly tell how she beats this „sickness“ of having doubts. Trust and hope is important but sometimes douts seem to be reasonable and that thought is going to keep hovering.
Overall I think that this is a very emotional poem.

*all these weird characters are supposed to be this " - they're different when I use a german writing programm and then turn out like this, I'm sorry lol.

Omg.. I love this piece!

It flowed so great..

FIVE :)

Connie, girl, I think this is one of the best, no, make that the best love poem Ive ever read. From "Huddled in the arms of doubt..." to "Passion flares at the sight of him..." to "Making her wait till dubiety is exorcised." each romantic line is perfect, and also the title, wow. You, NO DOUBT, are one talented author Connie.

A powerful poem expressing love (desired) and paranoia of a paranoid, as should be.

Modest doubt is called the beacon of the wise. "William Shakespeare"

Connie, I never expected to behold a write that is full of love, passion, desire and hope! :) What I loved the most about this epic piece is the flow, it is rare to find a poem that flows easily and smoothly, your poem did and you worthily deserve applause! :)
I feel proud I'm your friend, and that your words sometimes praise my poetry, you are a very talented poetess. :)
Well, let me start with the title, it was eye-catching and exclusive. I like it.
However, mind me not saying that the last two lines of the opening stanza were a bit cliche, to write something about fire burning the soul to describe sadness or disappointment is overused and not that captivating and you know, I love your writes and think they are original and unique, so I want you to change these lines in order to pen your thoughts and emotions in a better way. :)

Passion flares at the sight
of him, the scent of him.
^^^
How passionate, here. I almost imagined him breathing in a sensual way, looking at you. You've nailed it! :)
I love the originality of most of the lines in this piece, for sure, you cannot find that in every piece of poetry, there are lots of poems (including some of mine) that are just too simple.

He feels the fire, flames
of love lick at his skin
tasting , searing , as desire
tries to devour
^^^
I would advise you to listen to Jennifer and remove the spaces before the commas, they really seem confusing and weird. But other than that, this stanza has so many emotions put within. :)
-The ending was my favorite part of the write, I felt as if what I was looking for just came! (I was looking for an inspiration.:P)
Surely five and perhaps nominated the next week. Good talent, never stop writing!

Exquisitely Penned, Magnificent!!!