Beautiful poem, I just feel that if you're going to start it as a rhyming poem, it should continue this way all the way through, not saying all poems have to rhyme, of course they don't but I think it loses rhythm if firstly it rhymes and then it doesn't. It's a very good poem though :) Keep writing! x

Feeling lonely life undone- I often feel like their is something I should be doing that in another life time or a parralell world Ihave a life that I've acclomplished things this life this world feels so hollow. When fear seems like all you have that just going out interacting with people is scary after a while you just go numb

Feeling lonely life undone- I often feel like their is something I should be doing that in another life time or a parralell world Ihave a life that I've acclomplished things this life this world feels so hollow. When fear seems like all you have that just going out interacting with people is scary after a while you just go numb