An Ode to Slapping Shots

by Sykora   Aug 21, 2011


The swish and crunch
of ice under skates,
scratching the skin of a rink.

A snow dust stop.

Winding in noiseless space,
then a slap
and a boom as the puck hits the pad
reverberating.

Bloodied and bruised
they batter the puck around the boards,
sticks clacking,
until kicked, shot,
and rocketed through the air.

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  • 13 years ago

    by Jessie

    Love hockey:) I think this poem could have been done a little bit better though. I felt it was really rushed, without to much feeling or emotion put into it. Try really digging in to how that puck feels when it touches the end of your stick, how the cold air hits your lungs:)