by Sykora Aug 21, 2011
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
The swish and crunch |
by Jessie
Love hockey:) I think this poem could have been done a little bit better though. I felt it was really rushed, without to much feeling or emotion put into it. Try really digging in to how that puck feels when it touches the end of your stick, how the cold air hits your lungs:) |