Wow what imagery you've made love sound so beautiful.

Paull.... this was enchanting to read :)

though these feelings are very raw, and spontaneous, they need some grammatical and structural makeovers.. So, if you don't mind, check out this edited version of your piece :p
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It is what I see in your eyes,
a shining light,
a phenomenon unexplained -

The look on your face
how I feel,
and wonder about the emotions I get...

Amidst chanting angels,
I can feel with you
tokens of happiness and joy...
The laughter we share,
as if on a big feast...

I look up to the sky,
heavens gates are open,
I stare marooned,
I see you, my angel...

Amidst walking angels,
I walk with you,
just at the thought
the touch of your body,
so tender and soft...

An angel I see in you
The beauty that is you
Your sweet voice
If I were to think again,
I would not change my choice...

A love I have found in an angel
As time goes, so does my love grow

I see myself with you,
in places far beyond
A love we will share
My angel, for you I care

Feel my love in the air,
flowing with enthusiasm,
with warm heated passion
In an angels midst,
I am with you ...

-----do u like it? I hope u do.. I think it's so much better grammatically and structurally :)

5/5

Yeah i like it, you really do think better grammatically and structurally, i have made the suggested changes...thanx

This is very sweet and really really good.... i loved it :) 5/5

Nicely written. The wording is great and gets your point across. It is good length. The was great from beginning to end. I see nothing worth fixing.

I gave it a 5/5

"Amidst walking angels,
I walk with you,
just at the thought
the touch of your body,
so tender and soft..."

^ my favorite part

5/5

Really amazing poem.. Good job :)

Bravo i love it really the way of writing is fantastic love it 5/5

Bravo i love it really the way of writing is fantastic love it 5/5

This was so good, i really loved reading it

Your words never cease to amaze me
-Angel