by Robert Gardiner Aug 21, 2011
category :
Love, romance /
i love you
Have I Told You??? |
by rachael
This is beautiful! I loved it, well written |
by Tammy
Quite the romantic you are. Hope your lady knows how lucky she is to have someone feel this way about her. Lots of women out in the world would almost kill to hear such beautiful words from their man. |
Brilliantly written and a very powerful piece 5/5 |
A nice poem Robert! |
by East Poetry
I came across your poetry as I see we are in the same club on this site, I read your profile and must say, I am a little intrigued by your adoration for woman, it does (for me) come across as a touch over kill, I don't know, you might want to be aware of that, but I will agree with you on the topic none the less, Woman are the most amazing creatures on this earth. After reading this first poem of yours I will say... I am impressed, it was a well thought out poem and I'm sure a woman would absolutely love it. I see that you took care to make it rhyme. I always appreciate rhyme in a poem. I thought it interesting your use of so many commas, it did sort of add a unique rhythm to the reading of it. My only critique was that at times I got de-railed and I lost this rhythm. Over all a great poem. looking forward to reviewing a few more. |