Really sweet for your loved one. Expressions to match the love flowing in the writer. Romantic and a great write.

How sweet but so sad at the same time I just wish I had a love like that.

Sweet... Just a question. I'm not good at grammar so it made me wonder if all those commas were necessary?

You've just told us! ~ Love your poems.. they are sooo romantic and make us women wish they where written for us :)

Keep penning!

"Although, I might seem vibrant, like there's life, inside of me,
It's the thought of you that allow me the energy"

^Powerful lines

An overall beautiful write, 5/5!

mandy :)

U really r a lover! Wish i made someone feel that way:(

Beautiful lines Robert.

I came across your poetry as I see we are in the same club on this site, I read your profile and must say, I am a little intrigued by your adoration for woman, it does (for me) come across as a touch over kill, I don't know, you might want to be aware of that, but I will agree with you on the topic none the less, Woman are the most amazing creatures on this earth. After reading this first poem of yours I will say... I am impressed, it was a well thought out poem and I'm sure a woman would absolutely love it. I see that you took care to make it rhyme. I always appreciate rhyme in a poem. I thought it interesting your use of so many commas, it did sort of add a unique rhythm to the reading of it. My only critique was that at times I got de-railed and I lost this rhythm. Over all a great poem. looking forward to reviewing a few more.

A nice poem Robert!

..and yes, us men are (or should be!) truly in awe of women, for they are indeed the most beautiful thing in this world to gaze at.

Your poem puts this very well.

Brilliantly written and a very powerful piece 5/5

Quite the romantic you are. Hope your lady knows how lucky she is to have someone feel this way about her. Lots of women out in the world would almost kill to hear such beautiful words from their man.
Loved the write!!

This is beautiful! I loved it, well written