I don't know whether I'd put this in this genre/category, but then where to put it, I don't know, maybe Miscellaneous.
Anyways, The flow wasn't perfect, and I kind of had to read it twice to make sense of the last stanza, but other than that, a good job.

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Tara

I have to agree with Tara that I do not think it belongs into this category, you might think about moving it into Miscellaneous. It somewhat seemed as if you were focusing on the rhyme mainly while you neglected the content, which made it tough to understand. I do not think that it was as bad as my critique sounds now, sorry lol.