Wow I really like this :) it's really good but also somehow unique in a way :) 5/5

Larry wow.. this reality was well portrayed.

Passers by don't believe it
but what madness would lure him here

^ VERY TRUE!!

5/5

Sit
hot sun
street corner
with sign in hand
begging for money
"homeless and disabled."
-My favorite stanza but great poem the entire thing was fabulous :)
for the pittance stingy people give?
Despair becomes its own imprisonment.
-this is another part that i loved
10 stars 5/5:) :)

Amazing fantastic awesome wonderful I loved it greatly written and a delightful read 5/5