Leaving ashes.

by Just a girl   Aug 22, 2011


She's walking forward.

Never looking back, she proceeds.

An angle from heaven stuck in ashes.

All for a better future, there she leaps.

This is her leap of faith, She's leaving home.

Today, she's never looking back.

Rising to the light, here's a better day.

Here's to being better.

She's walking forward.

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  • 12 years ago

    by Just a girl

    Thank you so much!

  • 12 years ago

    by BlueJay

    I like this piece, a lot. It is short, yet has a message and a unique style to it. There is no rhyme scheme to confuse or annoy the reader, yet there is a wonderful flow. The way you molded this piece was perfect. Your voice is present and your descriptions are clear. Fabulous job. This piece brings me to think, and I like that. There is a simple word choice, though it fits perfectly into this piece. You have penned something beautiful, excellent job. 5/5

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