This poem flows realyl well and I like the rhymes as well. I thought that the metaphor of the candle was really well chosen because everybody knows that once a candle is set to burn it'll finish sooner or later. While it burns it offers light though and I think that fit well. The emotions are really heartbreaking too.

Wow I truly love this one, full of emotions and talent 5/5 x

Yes i like this poem and the feeling that resonate from your poem. life is cruel sometimes and seems unfair, but trust your heart and strive for life. keep penning dude unlock your talents.

Another favourite, I really enjoy your poems.

I liked the way your opening stanza was so perfect then the beginning of your second shatters that by saying it enver lasts, which is fitting for the message and hits quite hard.

Great work.