Love this(:
shows that you just wanna relax and stop being so frustrated with life and just let everything be good <3
5/5

Very good poem. The wording was great. It flowed nicely all the way through.

5/5

I think by reading this you are upset LOL kidding
the poem was great filled with frustration and anger. Maybe it's more a vent then a poem

Good job either way

Emotion is oozing out of this piece, so is reason. I think this is interesting, and unique in its own way. Magnificent job. 5/5