by Cinnamonspice Aug 22, 2011
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
Swimming into the |
A very powerfully worded dark poem, conveying thoughts of a dark time revisited to the reader, I presume, ending with thoughts of revenge and justice using a gun as a symbolic weapon - I as a reader, can feel the inner anguish, anger, and a need to avenge a wrong. ......Let the healing begin, wrongs will not go unpunished in HIS kingdom. Poetry is a good outlet to vent. So 5/5. |
by Brittany C
Wow, I really like this poem. It is sad but good at the same time. The wording was great and painted the picture for me. It is also a good length. The was good. |
by Decayed
WOW OWOWOWOWO!!! |
by nouriguess
What can I say??? would amazing suffice? |
Beautifully written somthing a bit diffrent from u a very good piece x |