Comments : I Love You, I Love You Not

  • 13 years ago

    by believeinlove87

    I thought I was over you,
    I knew i was over you.

    My mind said to let you go,
    that I was over you
    and didn't need you.

    You wanna know what my
    heart says though? My heart says
    to hold you close to never
    let you go, That if I try just a little
    harder that I'll be in your arms forever.

    So which do I choose to listen to,
    My mind or my heart?
    Should I just give up or should
    I try a little harder?

    That's all I would change. This makes it an easier read. But i love this poem. Its amazing.

    Telling yourself you're over her, but then realizing you're not. That you love her and want her but then you're confused.
    This flows well, is full of confused, love, wanting emotion but unsure.

    Great Job
    5/5