My promise, My vow

by Jack Nightengale   Aug 24, 2011


It didn't take long for you to capture my heart,
It all happened at the very start.

The love that I have for you is stronger than the sun,
I fell for you faster than a bullet fired from a gun.

I promise you forever, until the end,
You're my soon to be wife, my lover, and my best friend.

I am your Adam and you are my Eve,
I am here to stay, and I promise to never leave.

No matter the problems or arguments of who's right,
I'm with you and together we'll make things work, I'm here to continue the fight.

This is my promise, this is my vow to you,
No matter what, forever and always will I cherish and love you.

I love you, my dear Eve. :)

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  • 12 years ago

    by Rihanna

    I love this...amazing

    She's lucky to have a guy as sweet as you(:
    5/5 from me Babii x

  • 12 years ago

    by Paul Gondwe

    Beautifully written. loved how you assured your lover of your love and how you spiced it up with rhyming. great poem

  • 12 years ago

    by Im not broken anymore

    This is so beautiful!!!! I love it!!! Great job

  • 13 years ago

    by Lioness

    What a lovely, heartfelt romantic poem

    I hope Eve reads this! It's nice when a poem is written about you!

    The love that I have for you is stronger than the sun,
    I fell for you faster than a bullet fired from a gun.

    ^^^^^^^^^^^
    I love the imagery here!

    Well done

    x

  • 13 years ago

    by Innocent Fairy

    A fantastic lovely poem I loved it it's all so great and I can kinda relate,,,It was all really amazing :) 5/5

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