OMG YAKZ YOU NAILED IT, YOU LITTLE MONKEY!!! OH MY GOSHHHHHHHH THAT WAS UGHHHH DEPRESSING
I HAVE CHILLS AND CRIES AND OMGGGG...

were you describing ME!?

gosh girl you have an amazing talent...

This is very sad, a great piece and definitely from your heart, it sounds like you just poured your heart out, over here!

I loved the title, and I was in love with your closing stanza, it was breath taking, your opening is very soft and it did make me feel interested.

I do love this poem, a lot
5/5

Sometimes we find ourselves doubting all we are and what we stand for, and most often that happens when we go through changes, brought about by events that shock us to the core. It is hard to be kind when life comes down on you hard, when you feel you have been dealt a bad hand....and maybe you will even start to think you are a bad person yourself.

Don't worry, it will pass and you will be stronger than you were..and so it will be every time, every tear leaves you stronger eventually, until one day, you will look at yourself with compassion and know you are just human, like we all are:)

A very honest write, I have been there too!

5/5 Ingrid

Leaving a comment on my own poem..simply because

I feel like a boss at the moment.