Viven fuera de nuestra lengua (Live outside our language).

Mary, I suggest that you put (Live outside our language) at the very end of the poem, so that the reader would yearn to know what is Viven fuera de nuestra lengua .. (and pleasssssssssse capitalize these words! Except 'de' :)

This is another lovely piece of you.
You are very passionate when it comes to writing!

I can feel that you pour your heart out on every stanza you create :)

AWESOME!