This poem is a bit surprising! I had to read it with all my senses to grasp the meaning you want to deliver! :)

And you always make me ponder....

Remnants of a glimpse
to leave my eyes
breathless....
violet irises
absorbing moon's tide
and signalling
the plural sounding
of your capture.

^The wording here was immaculate, the imagery portrayed was vivid and the flow was great too, a great stanza

I walk through your imprints,
whispering in fallen rain and
composed thunder,
realizing-

^I loved this stanza, the shortness of this was what really caught my eye, the use of "whispering" here worked really well.

I've found a night,
where every pulse vibrates
the collapse of bones I've buried yesterday-
here you give me a feel
for an impelled, stirred land
distracting
all my envies.

^Wow, breathtakingly sad, emotion seeped through this stanza!

I think, I may hold
a sketch of you-
before it becomes
background to ends
of light and tunnels.

^Loved the ending, what a brilliantly penned stanza!

The flow throughout was flawless, and the emotion was strong throughout and also the imagery portrayed was very vivid and well done.

5/5

Love
Tara-Kay