I love this piece, it has such amazing emotion and this whole vibe about it that makes it so enjoyable to read. It is uplifting, and shows the strength you really do posses. I have to say your flow is immaculate. Your word choice is excellent. You have great description, and it stays with you the whole time. This is definatly a 5/5 from me! I can't wait to read more. Awesome job!

Thankyou sweetheart :)