by ntv650 Aug 25, 2011
category :
Love, romance /
love is
It is only a wink, a genuine smile |
by Jenni
I really liked your detailed discription because it portrays a vivid image. I also think that this piece flows really well and that the emotions are strong. The last stanza was my favorite part but I'd recommend you to remove those blank lines because they are somewhat irritating (the ones after the fifth stanza). |