As I read verse after verse I was wondering what the speaker could be judged for and I was about to think that the title does not fit but then I read the last verse and I get the point. Keeping those things to yourself till the very last stanza or verse captures the reader and encourages them to finish reading the whole poem because humans are simply curious. I think that the rhyme seemed force in between but the emotions obviously show, that the speaker loves the person.

I really like the meaning of the poem, and some people should read this, no one shoud be judged and you show that love always speaks louder x 5/5

The shouting and teasing I try to bare
The threats I take makes my heart tare
Everyday I feel sadness, pain and fright
How can something be wrong that feels so right?

^’Tare’ should read ‘Tear’. I think the last line should read “How can something be wrong when it feels so right?”, and this line is a little cliché. However the rhymes here were incorporated well.

I'm so in love I want the whole world to see
That one day some how ill make us in to a three
As sure as the sun will rise, this love will live on
Even in the pure darkness, our two hearts are one

^’Some how’ should read ‘somehow’ and ‘Ill’ should be ‘I’ll’, I like the last line here, so romantic yet dark.

No matter what you say ill never end it all
I'll never feel ashamed, ill be standing proud and tall
So don't talk to me if you have nothing nice to say
Don't judge me because I love him; don't judge because I'm gay.

^Again, ‘Ill should be I’ll’,
I like the meaning of this poem, very good, Brilliantly done
The flow was good and rhymes were incorporated well, I thought the emotion was real yet simple.

Love
Tara-Kay

Sorry about the strange characters! I must remember not to copy and paste from word processor!

A poem with insight. You did a great job of this, saying a lot about life actually. it's not easy and sometimes very cruel.
good work sweets :-)
Connie

Love this<3.
Nobody should judge anybody bcuz of anything. Great job <3.

I'm so in love I want the whole world to see
That one day some how ill make us in to a three
As sure as the sun will rise, this love will live on
Even in the pure darkness, our two hearts are one

Love that stanza, shows how pure your love is && That you want the world to see how strong it is regardless(:

Good write, i really c and feel the way you feel about love

I agree with some comments above.
Nobody should be judged by the way they are. Everyone has something different and that is just the amazing thing of it. Not everyone is the same and some people just need to learn to accept it.
nice poem
5/5

-blackstar

"tear" is misspelled in the second line.
but, of COURSE, I love this. I'm all about strong poems and standing up for yourself and others. Bullying and harsh judgements are my two biggest pet peeves. I love your tolerance and care for other people. It's sweet. :) Good one!