This is quite different to what you usually write but I actually like it. Especially that you decided to shorten each verse as you get to the end. Well done

I really like this, its small but clear, and full of emotions 5/5

Well I'm sort of speechless, this was really wierd, because it was emotional and dark yet in the miscellaneous section! Not what I expected at all!!
Saying that, the length of the poem worked well with this and the words were amazing!!
Good job once again
love
Tara

Very Intense , a lot deeper meaning then the surface words. I enjoyed the format too, very cool.

Connie

Its different from what you usually write, but i like it. Something new(:.

Questioning yourself & what you are, not sure if ur created by laughter or anger. But Likeee it<3

Nice Write
like it
5/5

Short but sweet..simple but intense..i like the flow of the poem,especially the choice of words...very romantic.....well done..

Short yet powerful.. specially towards the ending.
well written

Nicely written I like ur poetry !