by HiddenFromView Aug 25, 2011
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
Behind these eyes lies a heart of glass |
by Jenni
I like the flow and rhyme of this piece. I have to admit that the image of an "heart of glass" is not really unique but you managed to write a piece that is really original and contains a lot of emotions. This poem is definately heartfelt and its feelings are powerful. I actually like the ending because regardless how fragile and weak a heart of glass may be it still has the possibility stay strong. |