I can no longer enjoy
the calm landscape,
its redolent smell
or its gentle breeze.

^Brilliant Imagery within this stanza Jen.

I'm captured
in this desert of
the fallen, yet
I'm drowning in
these feelings
of mine.

^Another piece of vivid imagery and wording. My favourite Stanza by far.

I loved this piece, I thought you used great imagery, and emotion and the flow was great.

I loved the ending, how it was repeated in the poem, this was a great piece, so sad and heartfelt.

Love
Tara
xx

Let me tell u something AMAZING, I love this poem ofc 5/5:)

Wow Jen this is truly amazing, I loved the described emotion and the choice of words :)

Your use of wording was awesome, imagery and flow excellent. Great write
Connie

Omggggggg

u broke my heart with this........:'(
Jenni

I want to love you
once more, like I did
the very first time.

^^^
this was a killerrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr

five and nominated

Very good poem. It flowed nicely and the wording was good. 5/5

Yknow what I like best about this poem? Its the ".." at the end, somehow it makes me think that this isnt over, makes it mysterious and very interesting. Id love to read some kinda sequel to this sad love story, hopefully a happy ending. Very good poem friend.

Wow! I love this poem... I love the raw emotion you portrayed, I can really relate, especially at this time. I loved the imagery you've created and it really touched me. Amazing! =D

Nice poem
its really touch me ...

Every thing has already been said and so wonderfully put, all that is left to say is it is fantastic.

I think your poem is quite great. I won't be surprise if you wrote that from experience.

I luv it

Jenni jenni jenni .... AMAZING ... i wanna read more get on it :D

Your poems are absolutely all smiles
felt as if you were talking to me
i think i even blushed a few times lol
you have a beautiful sense of visual effects in your pieces

Your poems are absolutely all smiles
felt as if you were talking to me
i think i even blushed a few times lol
you have a beautiful sense of visual effects in your pieces

Very nice poem, I enjoyed it!

Your wording was awesome, your sanzas are brilliat, and it does not drag on.
anyways, 5/5
You deserve it!:)
Jessi

"I want to love you
once more, like I did
the very first time."

Those lines...are so touching, Jenni.
Another amazing poem written by you!

5/5

-Heather