In my diary

by The Po whet   Aug 25, 2011


In my diary...
I've written;
the first words I stuttered to you
"I...love...you".

in my diary...
I've written;
why from that first day I saw you
I knew you were my godsend.

in my diary...
I've written;
the memories we've shared
the unconditional love you've given me.

in my diary...
my pen strikes gently
trying to demystify the mystic of your love.

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  • 8 years ago

    by Em

    A very unique piece with writing diary entries of some. I think many of us cam relate to this on how we write maybe not always in a diary but somewhere our first loves, their beauty and how they make us feel. Beautiful yet simple to say the least.

    Take care, Em

  • 13 years ago

    by Liliana

    This is really creative and heart-felt 5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by Decayed

    ^ I agree with connie :)

    This was so very sweet, original, and flowing!!!

    5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by Cinnamonspice

    Aww this was really sweet and touching. I use to write in a diary till my dad found it LOL.

    very simple but deep write.

    Connie

  • 13 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    Asembo, This was very good.
    I loved the use of the diary in this, it worked very well.

    The flow was a little rocky at the end but that can be ammended by removing "still"

    This was sweetly written, short but unique

    love Tara-Kay

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