Life Changing

by Brittany C   Aug 25, 2011


Gone are the days of freedom
gone are the days of carefree fun.

Here are the years
of change and responsibility .

Here comes marriage
and little babies.

Here is where love grows
and our relationship strengths.

Here are the times of change
and the beginning of a new life.

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  • 13 years ago

    by keithnwv

    Very true words. Hold on to these days. Hold on to your family. Hold on to your friends. Dont let life slip by and realize you have put so much into providing for your family that you have neglected yourself. Friends mean so much, especially when you realize you dont have any.

  • 13 years ago

    by Innocent Fairy

    This is really great :) :) 5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by BlueJay

    This is short, yes, but it has many fabulous aspects. The wording is amazing and totally fits the piece, the imagery and description are spot on, the flow is immaculate, the story/ meaning/ message of the piece is terrific. I like that the beginning is simple yet draws you in. Yet the end is strong and really ties it all together.

  • 13 years ago

    by believeinlove87

    Short but to the point. Very true...(:. I like it<3

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