Comments : Tears Of Yesterday

  • 13 years ago

    by Boy

    I will say this is touching. so short but describe alot of emotions. good work once again :)

  • 13 years ago

    by nouriguess

    Omggggg i so damn much love this!!!!
    you wrote something i am feeling nowwwww
    and i omggg am speechless!
    this was simple yet full of subtle stuff like the soft meaning behind it and the flow, everything!!!! :D bravo Meme!!!

    I'm still struggling to remember
    the moments we once shared,
    every breath we took in the
    silence of the words, only to
    realize you never left this place.

    ^^^

    Here i was in an aweeeeeee
    WOW
    the silence of the words, have u ever heard about this? lOL
    u could write a fairytale!!!

    It was me who paused life, when
    you held me in your arms, I just
    surrendered to the rhythms of yours
    heart, and closed my eyes as you
    wiped all the tears of yesterday.

    ^^^
    it should be "your" not "yours" ;)

    an epic write
    good for ya!

    five...:)

  • 13 years ago

    by Liliana

    I really enjoyed reading this poem, it is truly heart-felt amzing 5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by Prasad Baadkar

    ... Sum moments r lyk a photographerz precious subject can b clickd just once in tym...;) 4 otherz dey r just photographs.. So beautiful, but for d photographer dey r just precious..

    Same wid ur writes fren.. Dey r turnin better n better wid tym..