by Jenni
I really like the flow of this poem because it's really smooth. I also like the connection to the rain as it is quite calming to some people but it causes most people to feel down. You definately penned a relateable piece here that seems to be really heartfelt. |
Thanxx =) |
by Madison
Good stuff i like it brutal imagery |
Thanxx =).... xxxx |
by kyle
Very good, sad and emotional |