by Innocent Fairy Aug 26, 2011
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
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by average thoughts
Wow..this one beautiful agn..loved it ..excellent..5 sweets |
by Brittany C
Not a bad poem but some of the lines are a little to short. It throws the flow off a little. Something else that would also help with the flow is if you broke it up in to at least two stanzas. |