by Exostosis Aug 26, 2011
category :
Dark, fantasy /
other
I'm standing here, waiting. Staring into the abyss. |
Very nice :-) I loved this poem. I got lost in the words, like reading a good book. I will be reading more ..Take care |
by Exostosis
Thank you ^^, |
by Tara Kay
Now looking at the changes, I think it is easier to read, yes. |
by Tara Kay
Okay, This was difficult to read, and I'm saying this becuase I want to give an honest comment. |
by Brittany C
Good poem. But I would break up the 1st and 2nd stanzas in to 2 smaller ones. Other then that the wording is good and easy to understand. I liked it. |