Lost and Found ( dont know what category to put it under)

by Brittany C   Aug 26, 2011


I turn around and there you are
I turn back around;
you are now nowhere to be seen.

Walking on,
I look for you
But you are lost to me.

Panic over takes me
It paces in my heart.

My breath is stolen
skin stone cold.

I turn around,
there you are
I found you again.

This time you stay with me
I never lose you again.
I just wont allow it.

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  • 13 years ago

    by L

    I can relate to it.. But I thought that It needs a bit of rhyme. I know that not all poems need to rhyme but it would nice to see this one rhyming.

  • 13 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    This was much better than the counting sheeps poem I thought. Seems to have a bit more meaning within it. You've actually expressed it to the point that I don't quite have much to say, because it probably came from your heart though it's sort of a cliche thought. It was much better than the first poem I read however.

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