This was much better than the counting sheeps poem I thought. Seems to have a bit more meaning within it. You've actually expressed it to the point that I don't quite have much to say, because it probably came from your heart though it's sort of a cliche thought. It was much better than the first poem I read however.

I can relate to it.. But I thought that It needs a bit of rhyme. I know that not all poems need to rhyme but it would nice to see this one rhyming.