We will last for ever
Because we love each other
trust one another.

^ I think this stanza is quite nice because its message is really strong and it's a good introductory stanza as well because it states the current situation of two lovers: that they're in love. Just some suggestions: "forever" is one word and I'd recommend you to either insert a comma after other or "and" in the last line.

I like the feelings in this poem because they are definately powerful. Your words may be simple but this simplicity underlines the love these two people share very well.

I like this poem because of the feelings they transmit and it seems really hear-felt keep it up :) 5/5