Perfect poem, my friend.

Simply breathtaking. Every inch of this piece screams with feelings.
Great write friend.

all the best and take care

I am always amazed at another's ability in writing. This was a great piece that I enjoyed immensely

Connie

Very good poem. Nicely written. It is a good length. The wording was great and got the emotion across. I see nothing that needs to be fixed.

I gave it a 5/5

A haunting poem and I can feel the emptiness you feel and pleading for someone who can never come back. 5/5

This is a really good poem, Nicely written and throughout you're words you could really get the emotion across. I enjoyed reading it and gave it a 5/5 :)

Hi Nik It's been a long time . I missed your poems. This was just as awesome as I remembered your work to be.
The first stanza was my favorite great opening .

Such a sad write it tugs at the heart and each line drips with feelings that cries for a solution..touching.

Such a sad write it tugs at the heart and each line drips with feelings that cries for a solution..touching.

Absolutly amazing

Wow. A very moving poem.

I loved the opening stanza:

"I want these words
to wash across me
like cold beads of water
wipe away the horror
of another night spent
alone."

Beautiful descriptions, I can see everything you wrote come to life in my mind. 5/5

mandy :)