You Have My Heart

by Kristal   Aug 28, 2011


My heart was broken
and you fix it
You have my heart
take care of it and dont hurt it
you know I love you
I met you sense I was in 10 and you in 11
you were only my friend
but that change
I dont know if it good or Bad
But I know that I want to be with you for a long time
And never let you go
if you have my heart take care of it
and never let it go
never let me go
cause you make me happy

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  • 13 years ago

    by Paul Gondwe

    I hav some few suggestions hope you dont mind..
    in line six,instead of "sense", i think it should be "since"
    in line two, instead of "fix", i suggest"fixed"
    in line 8, i suggest "changed" instead of "change"...
    and it this line "I dont know if it good or Bad"..i think it could be "i dont know if its good or bad"....

    but overall, this is a great poem i enjoyed reading..
    still gets a 5/5

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