Wow..this could be sad, but love as well..
i just love it, and am touched by it, and i felt the words and really do relate!

this is just amazing well done..
as if i am listening 2 it at the back of my mind!
loved it all

Once again great piece of writing... good work..

You already know how i feel about this peice in particular
but i want to praise you for the way you've managed to become as a poet,
i'm seriously amazed, Reading a couple of your old work then reading this, it's easy to see how you've matured.
its amazing walahe.
5/5 ya benti

Aww.. I loved it! I love the imagery you created with your words... I could relate, and you an ability to make even sad emotions sound so beautiful..

There were my favorite two stanzas:

Draw me a picture of
endless moments that
brings us back to what
we once shared together

Tell me the story of how
you read my eyes, translating
every emotion I felt inside,
in a tale of perfect silence

I can relate! Very well-written :)

Wow!!!!!!!! Such an amazing piece of writing ive been away for a bit and it appears that girl has turned into a woman. This my favourite work of yours to date, a epic piece by a fantastic writer xxx

Wow!!!!!!!! Such an amazing piece of writing ive been away for a bit and it appears that girl has turned into a woman. This my favourite work of yours to date, a epic piece by a fantastic writer xxx